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Did your peer include the following: _______ a Topic Sentence, restating the first point of discussion from the Thesis? _______ three to four supporting details that reinforce the Topic Sentence? _______ are the supporting details in order from weakest to strongest? Circle his/her strongest point! _______ a Clincher Sentence, restating the first point of discussion from the Thesis? 2. Did your peer include at least two transitional words/phrases? _________ 3. Did your peer include five to seven sentences? __________ 4. Do you feel like your peer has been persuasive within this paragraph? __________ Second Body Paragraph: 1. Did your peer include the following: _______ a Topic Sentence, restating the second point of discussion from the Thesis? _______ three to four supporting details that reinforce the Topic Sentence? _______ are the supporting details in order from weakest to strongest? Circle his/her strongest point! _______ a Clincher Sentence, restating the second point of discussion from the Thesis? 2. Did your peer include at least two transitional words/phrases? _________ 3. Did your peer include five to seven sentences? __________ 4. Do you feel like your peer has been persuasive within this paragraph? __________ 5. What rhetorical appeals did the author use? ______________________ Third Body Paragraph: 1. Did your peer include the following: _______ a Topic Sentence, restating the third point of discussion from the Thesis? _______ three to four supporting details that reinforce the Topic Sentence? _______ are the supporting details in order from weakest to strongest? Circle his/her strongest point! _______ a Clincher Sentence, restating the third point of discussion from the Thesis? 2. Did your peer include at least two transitional words/phrases? _________ 3. Did your peer include five to seven sentences? __________ 4. Do you feel like your peer has been persuasive within this paragraph? __________ 6. What rhetorical appeals did the author use? ______________________ Conclusion: 1. Does the concluding paragraph restate the following: ________ a restated/reworded hook? ________ a restated/reworded thesis? ________ a final thought 2. Did your peer say I hope you enjoyed . . . or Now you know about . . . ___________ Grammar: 1. Is the essay free of spelling mistakes? If not, make the corrections. ________ 2. Is the essay free of punctuation mistakes? If not, make the corrections. ________ 3. Is the essay free of contractions? If not, make the corrections. __________ 4. Is the essay free of numbers? If not, change the numbers to words. __________ 5. Is the essay free of run-on sentences? If not, add punctuation. ________ 6. Is the essay free of sentence fragments? If not, finish each sentence. _________ 7. Is the essay free of any apostrophe mistakes? If not, correct them. __________ 8. Is the essay free of abbreviations? If not, write out the words. ____________ 9. Is the essay free of redundant words? If not, write out suggestions for other words? Short Answer: 1. Was the essay effective? Did it persuade you? In what ways? 2. In what ways could the author have persuaded you better? 3. Are there any areas where word choice could have been improved? For example, did the author use words like stuff and things or a lot? Suggest other, more intellectual, words. 4. If you were grading this paper, what would you give it? 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