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One of them is Roger. He drops a boulder on Piggy and kills him. "Roger, with a sense of delirious abandonment, leaned all his weight on the lever" (180). This caused Piggy's death.  A possible revision: The truest form of wickedness on the island is evident in Roger. He demonstrates his true depravity when, "with a sense of delirious abandonment, [he] leaned all his weight on the lever" (180). Well aware of Piggy's place beneath him, Roger willingly takes Piggy's life.  Another possible revision: Roger's murder of Piggy clearly illustrates the depths children can sink to without appropriate supervision. As he stood high above Piggy on the mountain, "Roger, with a sense of delirious abandonment, leaned all his weight on the lever" (180). His willingness to welcome the moment with "delirious abandonment" clearly demonstrates the level of pleasure that Roger received by committing this horrific act.  Read the following examples from student papers and identify whether the quote is embedded or not: write E for embedded and NE for not embedded. For each unsuccessfully un-embedded quotation, rewrite the sentence correctly embedding the quotation. 1. Most significant is Janes will to venture to hope for happiness and stability at Thornfield (250). 2. The town of Raveloe also sees a different side of him, so that no child was afraid of approaching Silas when Eppie was near him (125). 3. Gene pushes a limb of a tree just enough for Phineas to tumbled sideways, broke through the little branches below and hit the bank with a sickening, unnatural thud (60). 4. The townspeople have no need for him. . . .That if you could speak the devil fair enough, he might save you the cost of a doctor (3). They refer to him as the witch and attempt to communicate only due to his traditional healing skills. 5. 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